徐一诺是一个非常外向的孩子，非常喜欢跟人聊天。
今天打完流感疫苗后，我跟他准备回家，路上遇到一个卖披萨的摊子。我就想买个披萨当晚餐。徐一诺从来不爱吃披萨。
我在等我的披萨制作的时候，徐一诺就跟卖披萨的老板娘聊了起来。
“你们是今天在这里还是以后都在这里？”
“我们就在这里几天了”
“那我怎么没见过你们”
“我们就在这里几天，过几天我们就去别的地方了？”
“你们为什么要去别的地方？”
老板娘不知道怎么跟小孩解释这个事情，就没回答他。
他从来不吃披萨，但是张口就说：“那我明天还来买披萨。”
老板娘有了这么一个忠诚的顾客，很开心的笑了。
原始文章
Xu Yinuo is very outgoing and like to talk to other strange or familiar people.
After taking a flu vaccine, we are on the way to go home.
We saw a pizza booth is on the side road. I decided to buy one pizza for my dinner. The pizza was just for me because Xu Yinuo don’t like pizza.
When I was waiting my pizza that was making. Xu Yinuo didn’t want to lose the chance of talking with the boss of pizza booth.
“Are you at there for today or after today?” said Xu Yinuo.
“We are just at there for several days.” the boss said and was making pizzas.
“Why did I not saw you before?” said Xu Yinuo.
“We are already here for a few days.” the boss looked at him and replied very kindly.
Xu Yinuo became to more serious when someone speaked to him with eye contact.
“Why are you going to other place?” said he.
The boss didn’t know how to explain this things and didn’t replied him. The boss just smiled.
Though Xu Yinuo NEVER like to eat pizza, he said, “I will buy pizza tommorrow.”
The boss had a loyal customer and laughed more happylier.
批改后
Xu Yinuo is very outgoing and likes to talk to other both strangers and familiar people.
After taking a flu vaccine for Xu Yinuo, we were on the way home.
We saw a pizza booth was on the side of the road. I decided to buy a pizza for dinner. The pizza was just for me because Xu Yinuo doesn’t like pizza.
When I was waiting for my pizza, which was still being made. Xu Yinuo didn’t want to miss the chance to talk to the pizza booth owner.
“Are you staying here for today or will you be here beyond today?” asked Xu Yinuo.
“We’re only here for a few days,” the boss replied while continuing to make pizzas.
“Why haven’t I seen you before?” asked Xu Yinuo.
“We’ve already been here for a few days,” the boss said, looking at him kindly.
Xu Yinuo became more serious when the boss spoke to him while making eye contact.
“Why will you go to another place?” asked he.
The boss didn’t know how to explain this sort of thing, so he didn’t replied to Xu Yinuo. The boss just smiled.
Even though Xu Yinuo NEVER likes pizza, he said, “I will buy one pizza tomorrow.”
The boss had gained a loyal customer, so he laughed even more happily.